by gomets13
you have the making's of a nice series. I think Becky can be a really hot piece of ass.
personally i thought u went the wrong way when u had her fuck him.... i mean it was a major turn off. hell u could have gone with orgasm torture. a bit of pain or done the fun thing of wild sex. not the disgusting thing of fucking him like that
I could have done without her fucking him. The story seemed to be building to her submitting to him, at least in a sexual 'I need you' way, and then she took control again.
Definitely a turn-off. Up to that point, you were rocking my cooch.
I'll disagree with the others.I liked the strapon part, more please.