by venuslovebugs
I loved it. So hot, spontaneous and full of raw but real sexuality. Wish it would happen to me...
I think your choice of title is a good indication of the though you put into your writing. It's very erotic, but more than that, it's a well crafted story.
This is too HOT! But what happened next?! How did they feel afterward? Did they become closer and swingers, or feel uncomfortable with each other and grow distant? Was there jealousy, or was it all a huge turn-on to be repeated again and again into the distant future? A-R-G-H!!! Need more!