All Comments on 'Militarty Mom'

good story cant wait for the next one.

Didn't like the fart scene but fun short story, thanks.

dumb is the first word that comes to mind, and nothing more charitable follows.

The story is pure junk so hard to read its not worth wasting any time attempting to do so. The extremely frequent over use of ... which even a grade school kid wouldn't do. Then there's the AAAA...AAAA... making up almsot entire sentences and pragraphs is insulting to reader intelligence. The story should be remove and sent back to the author until it's fully rewritten, been proof read and spell checked, and a good editor has looked at it.

It's a play on "military" and "tart."

Absolute crap with a capital S. Calling it pathetic would be kind

What can I say, I fucked up on the tital spelling. And yes, I know how to spell "Military". What's done is done so get over it. But thanks for your honesty. It's why I allowed public comments.

Good, but too short. Add to it and your rating will probably go up.

I should charge you for making me read this story

I want to be the son sooo badd :) , lol...loved your story!

Thank you!

Very good

My older lady friend role plays mother and son sex slaves and take we each turns to be the slave, you have covered most of the things we, as you say not for eveyone but if the two people involved are happy to do it go ahead and do it, so long as it does not involve young kids.

sixtyniner2009

Wow, what must the psychology of the writer be like! Probably a whole book on abnormal psychology could be written on him.

it was ok but the end was a little much oh and ladies the rude comments only show that u r dum

Good story. Have military mom make her son into her toilet slave. Make him lick her asshole clean after she craps.how about some straight off the toilet ass to mouth where she makes the son suck shit stained jism from her dirty unwiped ass. Military mom could pimp her son out for ass felching parties.

please write more.......

Sorry, it sucked.........LAROC OF AGES

Dear Grammar perfection police... Sorry I do not have an editor yet and have tried three times unsuccessfully to find one. Grammar is not my friend and if it is yours, congratulations. If your OCD like tendencies will not allow you to muddle through some errors, typos, and the odd omitted word I apologize and hold no grudge knowing that you have moved on to more well established writers like Chekov, Tolstoy or Hemingway. Please keep in mind that this is an amateur writing site and if you are compelled to correct peoples spelling and grammar, you might satisfy your correction cravings by becoming an English teacher.

it would have been better if it was her and his cum all over her sons body

Please do a part 2

Thanks for not writing another part you lost it when you started with the disrespectful bullshit on slave and shit