All Comments on 'Aunt and Nephew: An Encounter'

A very good story. But you really need to proof read your work, or get an editor to proof it for you. There were a lot of mistakes in there that sometimes had me stopping to figure out who was doing what to whom, and who was actually doing the talking.

If you use and editor, you will have a great story!

This one is really HOT. It can make the undies of both gals and guys wet! Keep it up.

did you read it before posting?

a poor boy from a village who came to live with his aunt and uncle.

offers to take her on a date because uncle is cheating on her.

he offers dinner and maybe a visit to a club he knows.

then he is very wealthy and has his own apartment.

she can't wait to get him back into her in the passage from which he came. so now she is his mother?

etc. etc. etc.

so messed up I can't believe I wasted my time.

Awesome ! Loved it !