by Baxter72
Nicely written without any of the crudities one so often finds in stories. A nice gentle tale. Well done.
Excellent writing and look forward to chapter 2. I read with desired interest and wanted more to read. A great meeting of two people enjoying the fruits of life and especially the age differance!!! Thanks again for great read.
This story was pleasant — even touching — but it lacked the tension one would expect of a story with "slave auction" in its title. Stories of any sort usually involve some sort of tension, some obstacles to be overcome and/or some conflict.
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Events just flowed effortlessly. The professor was not very imaginative in his requests of her: that is very unbecoming of someone with a professor's mind.
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The explanation made the premise of the story believable enough. The pacing was good: not too fast and not too slow.
Splendide! Un rêve délicieux pour certain parmi nous. Nous sentons la douleur a sucré pour regarder fixement sur les femmes à que nous apprenons en sachant nous ne devons jamais les approcher.
Dieu bénit de les femmes françaises!
Short and sexy sweet. Minus the usual grunting and heavy breathing. I loved it!