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Beautiful Story
I certainly hope that the love story continued forever but maybe she is unhappy that she did not get any other boys.
Oh well, it is a story of the moment and living only in the moment and very well told. Thanks, you are becoming a favorite author!
another red H
Almost every story you have posted here has a red H. This one will also.
awwe
that was beautiful!
I Loved The Story
Yes I Truly loved reading this story Many Feathers .
Very Good
Great Story,
I even made the wife read it and she agrees
Fantastic.
A story that even though I knew the ending, your every word kept me reading to the very end, hopeing that I was correct. A truely great read, well done.
Because ...
I finally took the time to relax and read and what I read was as others have said " Beautiful " Not so much sex and naughtiness, just a real love story with a lil dash of naughtiness threw in, lol.
Loved this one MF ... More please ~~~
True love wins!
Step-sis and Step-bro. True love wins! hehe :)
Real nice little tale.
I really enjoyed this one, MF. It was a nice and tender little love story. You did it well. Thanks so much for a fine read.
I Loved It!!!!
A very well written, beautilful story that I really enjoyed, thanks for sharing all your hard work, Many Feathers,
MoogPlayer
Great Story!
I like your work, as you are one of two writers on Lit, the other being DG Hear, who have inspired ME to write. Keep them coming and God Bless.
Gerry
It was just a beautiful love story.
I gained a whole new respect for your work, after having read this story. The fact that one of my favorite writers of all time managed to leave three comments on it, over a number of years, didn't hurt either. Definitely a Five Star effort!
IT WAS INDEED A BEAUTIFUL LOVE STORY
I read this story because your name was number one on the favorite authors list. I went to your bio and selected this story to read and I am now in the process of reading all your stories. I voted this one a 5 and I anticipate many more. Thanks.
Uplifting and Satisfying Story.
I enjoy a tale with interesting character development, and a bit of surprise turn of events. Thanks Many Feathers. Perhaps a little trite, but this work was another feather in your cap! 5 stars. Dan
GREAT STORY
LOVED THE WAY IT BUILT UP TO THE HAPPY CONCLUSION...NICE ONE
soooo...
This is really hot. My dick is twitching right now. I'm lying here with my stepsister/wife right now. This almost reads like our life story - fifty years ago! My hair's not as thick and the little blue pills help a lot these days, but its been a great ride. We've got three children and several grandchildren now. All happy, successful, and normal. Thank you for this. My sister/wife has good days and bad days and this evening was a good one but they are coming less often. We laughed and cried and made love tonite, but I always have to wonder if it will be our last time for her to truly be with me. Thank you again, this means a lot.
yes
This is a great love story. Its got romance, unrequited love, love realized, confusion, great sex and marriage. Good job.
Wonderful
Ya gotta love a romantic ending......even if I am 60 yr old man
Yes, great story
From start to finish you had me hooked plus I'm a sucker for a happy ending..5 stars
Extremely Good Story
The only thing missing was how to finance a decent life. Jobs are difficult to find really good ones even harder. A college education is no guarantee, but still with a degree there is 4x higher employment than not having that degree. It is important to get a degree that CAN get you a job.
great story of love
no reason why they should not marry as not related to each other.....loved it
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