I loved this. Will there be more to the story. I truly hope so!
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Anonymous09/15/08
Great story
Hope there is more to this story....
by
Anonymous09/15/08
Lovely
Surprize, this would light his fire for sure. Lets have chapter II.
by
Anonymous09/16/08
Sarah
Wow!. It seems every story I read has a Sarah in it, if I ever have another daughter I will make sure we don't name her Sarah, putting that aside I think if you wrote on a first person line your story would score hot, hot.
English
HOT
I loved this. Will there be more to the story. I truly hope so!
Great story
Hope there is more to this story....
Lovely
Surprize, this would light his fire for sure. Lets have chapter II.
Sarah
Wow!. It seems every story I read has a Sarah in it, if I ever have another daughter I will make sure we don't name her Sarah, putting that aside I think if you wrote on a first person line your story would score hot, hot.
mmm
hope to see more from this!
very nice
This is your first story? Wow, looking forward to more. A few typos broke the mood, but all in all, it was pretty great.
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