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My Own Country Boy

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/15/08

SWEET, SWEET STORY....

This was a great story. Loved your writing and the characters. You should definitely consider adding more parts to this. It could be a lovely chapter story. Much potential here. Thanks.

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by cinnamon_kisses1209/15/08

i agree

I hope you venture into more with this story!

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by BigFtHunter09/15/08

Cute

I liked it alot but it somehow left me unsatisfied. Maybe it was the way it ended so suddenly. Good story though. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous09/21/08

got

wrapped up in the characters, great verbal foreplay, and then just the quick "in & out" of the sex scene at the end?! no, no, no!

i can tell you can do so much more with a story, so get to it camogirl88! ; )

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