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a great cheating wife story
A great cheating wife story with a unique and original plot.
Very Good!
Just listen to the keyboards tapping away. The cucks won't like the story because the husband didn't do what they wanted. The voyeurs won't like it because the husband didn't watch what was going on. The 'torch the bitch' crowd won't like it because, well , he didn't 'torch the bitch'. Readers like myself who want to read a drama about how a husband fights and wins back his wife we will like it. the casual reader probably will like it but for different reasons. As for me I think it is a well written story that took us on a fictional journey through a difficult time in a marriage. Would I do the same as the husband, perhaps not. But it's not my story. Anyway thank you for writing. i personally have tried to write a long story with lot's of chapters but I just don't have patients.
Great story
I loved the story and wouldn`t change a bit of it!!!
Came out well!
Enjoyed it all the way, more men than women cheat and if none of them were given a second chance, divorce would be a lot higher. Thanks for the effort.
Uh Ohhh!
""and Lord, thank you for Paul, the wisest and finest man I've ever known. Thank you for giving him strength when I was weak; for his forgiveness and fortitude to bring our family back together as it should have always been. And let me live in such a way, that every day I show Paul and the children my love, that I earn their trust and affection, and that I am never tempted to stray from the rock that is my happiness and life, Paul. Amen."
When the prayers start, it ain't long until the spiritual side takes over and the pussy will stop for EVERY MAN. Usually a religious woman will disavow sex like it is a thing never ever to be had again
Quality story
PostScriptor, I thoroughly enjoyed
the story but realistically I think
most men would have divorced their
wife under this type of scenario.
Kathy came across as self centered,
self absorbed and totally unappealing.
She didn't seem to give a rat's ass
about her husband, her marriage or
her kids.
It was still an entertaining
story though ...
Well Done
ending, in keeping with the whole story!!!
Top tier
This story belongs up there with some of the better cheating tales at the site. I have only been a reader for about a year but have probably read almost every cheating wife story.
I am not into the ones where the husband gets off on it or brings down death or something close to it on the cheaters. Leaving those types out, this story would for me be about an 88%. Absolutely great start at Literotica; please keep submitting.
All's Fair In Love and War!
I had left Lit for some time because of the dearth of good submissions with a unique story line. I really dislike it when the husband is unbelievably forgiving. Some of you might think this is one of those instances. Quite the opposite he exacted his price from both of them. Alvaron asked why he exacted his revenge on Kathy if he was going to forgive her. Paul wanted his family whole again but part of his being cried out for vengeance. His character was very human with all the inherent flaws that come with it.
I realize that the characters were defined for the most part in the original work. However, I would have liked to see you make Karl a little more dastardly. It might have made me feel a little more sympathetic to Paul and his OTT retribution.
Also I felt CH. 14-16 to be somewhat anti-climatic, you might have included them with the previous day's submission.
It was an excellent story, thank you for taking the time to write.
I do have a question for Alvaron: How do you get the paragraph breaks?
Good Story
Lots of people take issue, but what a great way to save a family, have fun with a hurtful situation, get a measure of satisfaction, and live happily ever after. I enjoyed it. Fun read.
Excellent Work
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your material. Please keep up the good work. It was one of the better stories I have read in a while.
Great Read
The truth is that overall it was fine continuation of the original tale. If you accept that this is a possible reality, then it explains the violent reaction of many of the readers and the large percentage of divorces. Reconciliation takes a lot of work! The victim has to have great emotional control and lots of patience! My only criticism is that we should have seen Kathy working hard to restore the balance. One does get the feeling that Paul pulled it off all by himself.
I put a captial P surrounded by the arrow head brackets with vertical spacing before and after when I want a paragraph break. It usually works in the final posting though the preview runs it all together. Let's see if it does work!
Awful Long Wimp Story
Just goes to show that even wimps can get revenge and still maintain their "wimpyness." At least it was well written.
Thanks
Good story and very enjoyable. Look forward to more from you.
Ok, well written & the reconcilation crowd ....
loved it. A summarization of others "comments" is an indicator of how the general population sees it. Most of us would not spend the energy or time to let the slut wife come back & reconcile [torch the bitch is a very realistic option],and the "wimp husband crowd" is happy with the ending even though they are so "fucked up" in their mindset. The man-haters see total justification of the outcome and the idiot authors like BT [bonnietaylor & sidekicks] see the end justifying the means [what a bunch of losers]. No matter who the commentator is the fact remains the author's efforts need to be recognized for the effort & time to develop such a detailed excuse to take back a slut wife. From that perspective - well done!
Author - "a challenge" - take on "Carmyn's baby" by JPB and see if you can mirror your efforts as extracted from this particular sorry story!
‘cheating with license to save the marriage’ -
– come again?
Reading the story, I was reminded of a statement said as half a joke: “I have to leave you in order to save the marriage". It's funny not only because it's an oxymoron bur because some things, you simply can't do alone ... being married being one of them. Together with the title come the essential defining requirements of married life, which if violated may not automatically 'void' the married status, but seriously damage it- say, like cutting portions of a the trunk of a tree...
The implied author seems to be working hard - mostly to convince himself I think, that certain such oxymorons can survive both logic and life ( like leaving you to save the marriage or cutting the trunk to save the tree).
Many comments alluded to the problem that both main characters are highly unattractive. As a result it's very difficult to empathize with either, and in turn one starts losing interest or feeling unengaged with the story.
The problem I pointed to at the first paragraph is somewhat different. The premise of the story - building or fixing relations or marriage by "doing the opposite" i.e. taking active steps to destroy it or agreeing for them to take place - is such an overwhelming absurd that it boggles the mind that such a blatant improbability could actually guide not simply a short story, but a long submission.
Let me make it clear, there is no evidence that such approach works, and from what people intuitively feel - the ‘rational’ of the husband for allowing this sabotage of the marriage to go on, has so many wholes I am not even going to start counting them. However - if the author came with his own internal reasoning - and was able to “sell” them to the readers as somehow unique case - it might have been at least a good story. What happens instead is an escalation of less and less probable parts of “the plan” which gradually make the story read more and more as a dark farce. I seriously doubt that this is where the author was trying to lead us to.
A Good Story
It was a good revenge and reconciliation add-on to the original. I look forward to more from you. Thanks.
Very well written story
I waited until all were posted and read this series in one sitting. This is a very well written series, regardless of whether you agree with the outcome of the story. PS's style reminds me a little bit of Creamer's.In terms of plot, "The Plan" was quite clever. Interesting that Paul never burned off a piece on the side, even though he had the opportunity to do so. The other positive about this series is that PS stayed consistent with the characters developed in the original two chapters.
A better ending but 'The Plan'....
drives this story into the fantasy genre. Look, Kathy gave Paul a terrible and false choice - accept his position as No, 2 or else. She was not emotionally confused she was a selfish child! Paul was No. 2 since they had been together 16 years and were raising kids and lo comes Karl and in a few weeks he and Karl are equals? So Paul launches this
'Plan' to get her back and pay back Karl. There are so many things that could go wrong with elements of the Plan it is worse than a Missions Impossible script. For example, Paul's insiders could have easily gave up Kathy. After all anyone who is willing to get a promotion using those underhanded tactics would be better served by exposing Kathy's wrongdoing, forcing her to leave and then being rewarded with the coveted position. Why risk things on an emotionally crippled husband? What bothered me the most about the 'Plan' was the pure deceit involved. In the end (with Kathy praying to God thanking Him for Paul) Paul was more dishonest and despicable than either Karl or Kathy.
ALL'S FAIR IN LOVE & WAR
Nice story and well written. I guess you could say that feeding your wife esctasy, giving her an STD and getting her fired was just a little of the payback that she had to endure for putting him through all the pain. Even though parts of the story were a little out there, like the ones I just mentioned, on the whole, the story was pretty consistent. Although, Paul would have to have been an emotionally strong and self aware person. Most people, especially men, when they get hurt they get mad because it makes them feel like they are more in control. Unfortunately, they usually aren't thinking too straight and do something stupid like shoot the bastards. After Paul calmed down and listened to his counselor he decided he wanted his wife back and then devised a plan to get her back and then methodocally and unemotionally implemented it. Some would say he was a wimp but it takes more balls to fight for his family than to walk away and cry. Well Done, I really enjoyed it. Karl got what he deserved for taking something that wasn't his. He probably drinks a lot now in some run down bar in a small town. I wouldn't want you coming after me.
Dark humor revenge
Without striking a blow, Paul smites his enemy. The truly modern warrior: intelligence vs. physical force, craft vs. confrontation. And all of that with some humor, dark humor, LOL dark humor. Some say Paul was a wimp; I say he was a goal oriented man of great strength and love beyond what most of us know. A family hero.
I am sick in my gut
Admire the plot line and skill of writing. Appreciate the time it took to write. Have intense dislike of the values it exhibits. The cheating the wife did is destructive to relationships. It is destructive in my value system not because one man's property is being shared but the non sharing and hidden emotions that occur. The things that are done for revenge because of the cheating are far worse than the wife's original transgression ever could be. Giving her the clap that takes mega doses of antibiotics. That kind of dosage of antibiotics has drastic effects on gut flora and all kind of health issues in the long run. He is worse than her and far less honest. His betrayal is much greater. If I had the time to write again ( I have been a published author) I would write a story in which she did find out what he had done and those consequences. He does not deserve his happiness.
good result ?
there was the wife that did all this stuff, just cheating on paul. she had no qualms in what she did BEFORE, and AFTER, she had none to continue, but in the open. now, that is love for paul.
he plots to get them, and did. separating them was ok, and revenge. for me, she would not have stopped, but for what paul did. that measure of love she says she had is questionable. he had meredith's card and did not even see what kind of option that was.
her cheating went to extremes and leaving her to him was the better choice, esp where merdith told him he DID have options. in the end, quite personal, and ability to put the actions in perspective
Good Read - Great ending
This was an excellent read... In real life, I think it would certainly have ended badly and much earlier... I thoroughly enjoyed the ending you gave it though. I look forward to more stories by you. Thanks!
A few comments, some good, some bad.
One reveiwer said more men cheat than women. I find that an interesting stat. I guess they get it by saying some men cheat with men and therefore there are less women involved. Actually in most cases housewifes have more opportunity to cheat than any others. And since sometimes women cheat with women I guess the gay issue doesnt disturb the stats. I find it difficult to think a man cheats without a woman, or without a man. (Lot of busy sheep out there I guess.) Your ending is good, but no better than the original. This woman was a hardcore cheater and liar. She lied by omission to her husband, totally disrespected him, and placed both of them in harms way by physical, financial, and medical risk. I would never have even considered reconciling with her and definately never touched her after I knew she was fucking and sucking someone else. Her flat statement I love you and I love him is a deal breaker, if it were true each man only gets half of her love. Personally I dont think the revenge was over the top in any of the actions. And contrary to a reveiwers statement, unless you are dealing with the drug resistant variety, the clap can usually be cured by one shot. And almost all orally taken antibiotics for any illness kill the flora and fauna in the gut, and can bring on anice fungal based infection around the urinary opening. Trust was never really taken into consideration in this story, and watching a spouse 24/7/365 is a major pain in the ass.
who
Who was the real fool the husband of course,he resorted to trickery to get her back her sister and her kids couldn't get her to leave karl. So in the end she came back after screwing karl all she wanted and the husband think he won something he did a slut who openly screwed her lover in front of her co-workers and family.GREAT STORY BUT IN REAL LIFE SHE WOULD BE HISTORY AND GONE.
Nah
It's not about punishment, or retribution, or even a reckoning. A good marriage is something to fight for. When one partner fucks around, for whatever reason, it's no longer a good marriage....the trust is gone, the faith is gone, and love got kicked in the ass badly. In your story you lay out how a man fought hard to hang onto the woman who turned her back on her husband and her kids, and all for a fuck! Who is seriously still "in love" with someone they haven't seen in 20 years, especially when they've been married to someone else during that time? Who trashes a lifetime over some strange dick, and what man would want to be with a woman who did that? You wrote an inventive story; it's not believable, not really plausible, and doesn't even take into consideration the next long lost fuck the "loving wife" will step out with.
I just discovered this fun story . . .
We must remember this story represents fantasy land vengeance. As such, males who are partial towards the male character getting even with the man who illicitly fucked his wife will generally like this type of tale. I certainly did. Frankly, considering how many men would think it's perfectly OK to shoot the lover and cheating wife (when catching them in the act), and considering that such was legal in a number of states not that many years ago, I feel that a little Ecstasy plus a bit of Gonorrhea served up hot are not that big a deal. Obviously using them is immoral and illegal. And I recall being taught in elementary school that two "wrongs" don't make a "right." But it is so much more satisfying to go instead with "An eye for an eye," isn't it? At least in the Nirvana of a story that is purely fiction? I do admire the originality (although not the length) of this alternative yarn. Thanks for writing.
Now I see why ....
author had to premise tale on far out behaviors.I forgive completely since the "plan" was such a wonderful and well constructed plot device.And cleverly unique.For me if the investment and ties are that deep,much better to have wife truly remorseful and eating out of my hand, than eating out of a dumpster.I'd probably go for the alienation of affection money from "Hot Karl"-(get it, all you sex fiends)-just for start-up money.Pistolpackinpete
Sorry I dont like the ending, or for that matter
what led up to the ending. The wife had for all intents and purposes left the marriage and was pursuinig an affair with another man while allowing her husband and family to wallow on the side. She did everything a worthless slut can do to her marriage and yet, he loves her and takes her back, give me a break. As soon as he knew of this he should have given her a choice, the guy or her family and kids. To do anything else is to remove all love, caring, respect, and dignity from the marriage. It isnt a matter of male ego. It isnt a matter of being a cuckold. It isnt a matter of letting her get her itch out. It is a matter of her being and adult, married, with children. She abandoned all of this for a flign with a childhood sweetheart who abandoned her before. Some people are mentally challenged, to use the pc term. This woman is just fucking crazy and deserved divorce and being removed from her children for their good. Get his revenge on both of them, then drop her off on a street corner downtown where she can earn her hotel room rent. You can love a person and still cut them out of your life and move on.
The previous "Anon" spelled it out very clear ....
This slut wife did not deserve to get back together with the husband. As previously said, the ending was contrived to achieve the almighty "reconciliation at any cost" in a very long writing effort. The male was desperate to take the whore back without any real justifiable reason. Frankly, the kids would most likely be better off without all the drama these two adults inflicted upon them.
Not So Unbelievable
I agree with almost all of the posts, from the "don't like" and unbelievably unrealistic to the "loved it" and believable, and all between. As fiction, it's quite unbelievable, but real life is very often much stranger than fiction. The wife's behavior and excuses, and The Plan, seem outrageously and unbelievably unrealistic, but the fact is there really are women/wives that can and do behave the way this wife did, and men/husbands that would try such plans. Most of us hear about these kinds reported stories now and then but dismiss them as rare aberrations or exaggerations if not outright untruths. They may not be so rare after all, though. Congrats for a well written and well plotted story.
why is it the black men did it
it sad that black men came along and gangbang her.do this sound like the women in s.c and pa.always the black man.
excellent story
one of the best stories that i have read on literotica. write some more like this....intelligent construction of the whole story.....loved it....
HOW COULD
How could anybody spend that much time writing a story about an idiot who had to use trickery to get his wife to stop fucking another man and then try to make every thing allright because she is back with him. Must be something new because most people would just do what was done in the first installment of this story and get rid of the slut if a husband and kids who love you are not enough then get.
Hard to review this one
Your writing skills are wonderful. The story made prefect sinse and flowed well. But I have to question if any man would really find himself in that position. He had his balls cut off in front of everybody they knew. And the revenge he took out on his wife and lover was the best I have every heard of. But how could any man respect himself by taking her back. And I wonder if her prey at the end of the story would be so heart felt of she knew all the shit that he put her through. Seems this marriage is built on clay and will fall apart quicker than you think.
Very well written
Although, in all honesty, I have to say I don't completely agree with how your characters resolved their problems, your writing is so enjoyable I couldn't stop reading.
I have read all of your submissions and enjoyed them all.
Please write more soon
Thank you
Great Story
I can't say that I would have gone to the trouble to "win back" a cheating wife but I REALLY enjoyed your story. To quote Hannibal from the A-Team, "I love it when a plan comes together!" Looking forward to checking out the rest of your stories.
I agree
You spent a lot more time and effort than she did, and a lot more than she was worth. But good read, thanks.
Much better
Your story was much better than the original ending. It was a very good read as a story. Very well done. Loved the way the hubby's plan came together. I did not like the reconciliation at the end although I like reconciliation stories. Her actions and attitude were way too much for me. Aside for the children I would have loved to see him leave at the end. She really suffered no consequinces from her actions other than loosing her job. (and maybe her reputation) But even that would reflect on him. Anway, thank you for a good read. Might want to try a book. Your expansion of the first story suggests that that is possible. Jim
I liked it
I have read a number of different endings for this story, but yours was the best and most satisfying.
Wow!
Now that was a fun read. I am amazed at some of the plot devices that you came up with. Incredible. The best of the Suspicion related stories, BY FAR!! Thanks for all your time and efforts in bringing this to us.
JR
Yes, absolutely, WOW !!
From a west coast UK man to a Western USA man, congratulations on a fabulous read. A fiendish plot. I much preferred your alternative Chapter 2 and the route it took us on. The amount of thought and sheer hard work that goes into a story series such as this is no minor task, and we readers should applaud you.
albeit distasteful in real-life, from a technical standpoint it was very interesting although pretty long-winded
It was easily picked up in Chapter 2 that he was crazy. It was confirmed when he went to that football game and was laughing at his approaching wife and the thought of his revenge, and some guy commented that he thought hubby had gone crazy. I can see that you as the author wouldn't put up with this in your life; and you're just flashing the spotlight on the alternative to show it for the real craziness that it is. How can a wife not be ashamed and stop? How can a husband allow his wife to be shared? How much sex can a lover in the afair expect? In real life of course women will either stop or most men will walk away. And affairs cannot run on sex alone, because the truth is that they'll stop without emotional bonds or the cheater will find more sexual partners to stoke the fires.
Well written although incomplete. It needs another two page chapter. In that chapter
Paul arranges for Karl to have a fatal "accident" and for his "loving" cheating slut of a wife to hang herself. Awwww, too bad she couldn't live with Karl gone.
Brilliant
Nicely woven tale written so we could maintain our sympathy for karen
Well done - plot & technical aspects but the slut still got away with it, no real consequences.
Hell of job, author! Not enough revenge for our taste because she comes out of the whole deal with forgiveness & her marriage in-tack. In essence, a slut who has a full-blown public affair -with no lasting recriminations [willing cuckhold?]. And docile weak husband who did not have enough brains to get some on the side to balance the scales - that part is disappointing indeed. And the kids have these two idiots as role models - no wonder the world is so jacked!
trust
The last chapter had them in a changed situation. There are other men for her to have contact with, and trust repaired? Better to modify life without her than have a knawing lack of trust.
Brillant alternate conclusion to the original story....
I like you ending better than any of the others I have read. But, I still think that after the asshole was out of the picture that Paul should have destroyed her completely and kicked the bitch out.
Great Story
Far the best of all the endings. Your hero punished his wife and her lover, as he at the same time preserved his family.
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