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A Poem For You

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by Anonymous

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by Safe_Bet09/16/08

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Beautiful. This poem made my day. Superbly written and exceptionally moving. Thanks.

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by champagne198209/16/08

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This is a poem full of lovely sentiment. I'd like to see you stretch your imagery a little and explore more than the rhyming couplet as far as formula goes. But as said by SB, this is a fine poem and made my mood lighten this afternoon. Thanks for sharing.

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by WickedEve09/16/08

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This is one of the best I've seen from you. :) Keep writing!

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