All Comments on 'Walk on the Wildside'

It was so so, but what was it about? No lead up to the characters and no lead up to the ending. You need to write more and tell us what and why the characters are there for and what they see in each other. Has either girl experienced a woman before? Why was the ending written the way it was with no let down. Did Lucy cum? Was it being taped? Tell us more.

But it does need some editing and more elaboration. Keep working! (and find an editor you can work with).

Is it neccessary to call an asian woman a Jap? Sounds derogatory and racist.

Whether an asian; a Jap or no Jap...Your story has got the heat to warm me up...Keep writing more; please =D