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YES!
Loved the whole story - what more needs saying?
Leo
Thank You.
I Have Enjoyed all of your stories!!!
Thanks
Thanks for giving us 7 chapters of a great story.
Now we may have the pleasure of going back and reading the entire saga-cover to cover so to speak.
Fantastic
As I have recently discovered you are an extremely talented author!
Thank you for this story, it made me smile, laugh and cry, so many times I forgot where I was.
I look forward to your next story!
C
One complaint...
fist off, GREAT work, havn't read everything, but like what I have (about 1/3). But what happens with Kara and her half brother and sister? What about Ally and Ed? What about Ally and her bible-thumping family? Hell, just what about Ally? You ened abruptly, jumped 2 years ahead and left some plot points unresolved. Other than that, write on brother. Looking forward to the Honeymoon in the "temporaty girlfreind" series.
WOW
Absolutely beautiful. If I try to describe how this made me feel, how much I loved it, and how great the experience of reading it was, I'll just ramble and stutter....and that NEVER happens to me! I went looking for a little erotica and found a fantastic story about life, sex, and love. Please god keep up the amazing work!! lol
10 Stars
Awesome story! Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful thing. I'd need 10 stars to give you the score you deserve.
Great series
Once again you have another great series of stories.
Loved it, just wish I could give them all ten stars...
Learning Something New
I have read everything you have written and posted here. You have Definitely taken me out of my comfort zone many times. I may not be willing to change my lifestyle, but my thinking has changed a bit. As I read these stories over and over, I am growing more and more desensitized to the life style and philosophy you seem to hold dear. Please keep writing.
Love
Thoroughly enjoyed it
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I read the other comments and am surprised. You did discuss STDs and the emotional baggage some of the characters carry. No, you didn't resolve all the issues, and I think that's to be applauded as a bit more realistic. Big thanks for this.
Could not stop reading!
I started this earlier in the evening and had to read all chapters...couldn't put it down...had to stop for interruptions...finally finishing now at 4:15am. Now I can go to bed...LOL! Really enjoyed this!!!
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