by Romantic1
Thanks for giving us 7 chapters of a great story.
Now we may have the pleasure of going back and reading the entire saga-cover to cover so to speak.
As I have recently discovered you are an extremely talented author!
Thank you for this story, it made me smile, laugh and cry, so many times I forgot where I was.
I look forward to your next story!
C
fist off, GREAT work, havn't read everything, but like what I have (about 1/3). But what happens with Kara and her half brother and sister? What about Ally and Ed? What about Ally and her bible-thumping family? Hell, just what about Ally? You ened abruptly, jumped 2 years ahead and left some plot points unresolved. Other than that, write on brother. Looking forward to the Honeymoon in the "temporaty girlfreind" series.
Absolutely beautiful. If I try to describe how this made me feel, how much I loved it, and how great the experience of reading it was, I'll just ramble and stutter....and that NEVER happens to me! I went looking for a little erotica and found a fantastic story about life, sex, and love. Please god keep up the amazing work!! lol
Awesome story! Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful thing. I'd need 10 stars to give you the score you deserve.
Once again you have another great series of stories.
Loved it, just wish I could give them all ten stars...
I have read everything you have written and posted here. You have Definitely taken me out of my comfort zone many times. I may not be willing to change my lifestyle, but my thinking has changed a bit. As I read these stories over and over, I am growing more and more desensitized to the life style and philosophy you seem to hold dear. Please keep writing.
Love
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I read the other comments and am surprised. You did discuss STDs and the emotional baggage some of the characters carry. No, you didn't resolve all the issues, and I think that's to be applauded as a bit more realistic. Big thanks for this.
I started this earlier in the evening and had to read all chapters...couldn't put it down...had to stop for interruptions...finally finishing now at 4:15am. Now I can go to bed...LOL! Really enjoyed this!!!
I was hesitant at first to read this story. I assumed one character (possibly from a poly family) went away to make porn. I was pleasantly surprised that all the family members were involved and made this story very enjoyable.
Simply Amazing!!!
I loved this entire series, but especially this ending. From the 'rude' question on to the last statement of "We wish you Love." that was a Powerful, Dramatic, Heartfelt, Passionate, and so much more, ending to (insert all the same adjective) piece of pure erotic entertainment that I have ever had the pleasure to read. You are a true inspiration. Not only as an author but also of this philosophy that is imbued in all your fine works. Thank You!
I really loved reading all 7 chapters of this story. I feel you have really opened my eyes to polyamory. As a "horny" male I of course was totally in favor of polyamorous relationships before I read this but now I have transformed into a huge fan of polyamory. Thank you for this, I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.