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Good vivid sexy fantasy!
Great job! I really enjoyed this! You write very well!
This was great!
Very cool story and very HOT! I hope you plan on adding more to this! It definitely deserves it!
Lovely story.
Well written and nicely left so that we want more. Hope there is more....
hot story
enjoyed the story hope to read many more. nice photo varry
hot
Spell Check
Saying that you spent a year on this before it was submitted would have meant that you'd perfected it.
Unfortunately, you haven't. Good story but you could have really done with spell checking before hitting submit. I'd love to know what a pair of beefs really are . . . .
just something...
FORWARDS = A direction ahead of you.
FOREWORD = The words before the first chapter of a book.
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