All Comments on 'Pusher Ch. 04'

this series was so hot, I really loved it

I hope you do more

Keep it up, I like that the chapters are coming fast and furious. It's great!

Again, this should be categorized Mind Control instead of Incest.

.... you need to work on your protagonists character. He's not just 'dumb-as-a-rock / ruled-by-his-cock'; he's also got some severe short term memory problems. [[Example: He sets up the trigger word 'Please' and not half a sentence later, forgets to USE IT!]] How dumb can one guy get? >>>> The only thing that keeps this tale from being pure sophomoric trash, is your vocabulary range, grammar usage and the fact that your boy seems to still have a twinge of conscience every once in a while. Of course, that never happens until after he unloads his ball sacks. >>>> Before you retort; "It's a fantasy"! Yes, I do know that fact, but for heavens sake, at least give your protagonist enough blood supply to operate both brains in tandem. Thanks for the effort.

4 chapters of blowjobs. You a 12 yr old?

2 Not-sentences.

Did you fail primary school?