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That was a sad but beautiful tale!!!
There is nothing worse then when i life is cut short but we always need to remember that things even the bad happen for a reason!!! But good things can come from bad!!! Keep up the good work, I really enjoyed reading it, even though it is made up i still almost cried. What can I say i am moved by strong emotion!! Look forward to the next chapter!!!
Excellent
I love all of your stories and wish you would have longer chapters so I could keep reading more! Keep up the great work and I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
MORE!
I am waiting for the next chapter! Well done!
I love it!!
Please write more i love it so far and can't wait to read the rest.
GREAT start
Please keep on working on this story!
Love it!!!
Keep going. I like you style and want to read more.
So sad. I felt like crying even though I'm falling asleep because its 1 a.m.
MORE MORE MORE!
nothing like the pain felt when a life is cut short. makes me wanna cry :(
i can't wait to read more from this series. keep the story coming....... chapter 2 here i come
you are a talented writer thank you and keep it up :D
awww.
Well it most definitly has a sad start but its a great story so far and i look forward to seeing more!
Promising
Touch, sensitive, believe able please keep writing
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