All Comments on 'Pure Heart Pt. 02'

This is even better than your story Our Shared Bathroom. The buildup is fantastic...cant wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

That was just an awesome line, one of the best I've read. Fantastic story.

Don't make us wait another six months for the next chapter. Hopefully you're reading this while simply taking a break from submitting the next chapter!

Please do not wait another 6 months -- right now, 6 hours seems like a long wait for the next installment!

This storyline is one of my all time favorites. Keep up the great work!

Very erotic build up. Palpable sexual urges and release. Thank you for a very enjoyable story. I wait eagerly for a sequel.

Can't wait to see the next part!

good but keep tanya out of it it would only ruin a good bro sis story but please let us know if the parents find out and if they go all the way and if she gets pregnant SOON!!!

Dude,

You have a talent. I hope you continue this story. I was hard the whole time.

Hopefully you wont take that long for the third part.

I've recently found that "teasing" bro/sis stories are a Hell of a lot better than most of the other scenarios I read. My hat's off to you sir, Masterful work.

Very well writen... bookmarked for the next part... cant wait!!!!!

I thought part 1 was great and you have outdone yourself here. Please hurry with Part. 3. I cannot wait to read!

How much longer till part 3?! I CAN'T TAKE THE SUSPENSE!!!

Come on, wher is the 3rd part of this great, wonderful story???!! I cannot wait for your excellent talent!!

Please, please, please get around to finishing this off sometime soon!

It has been a hot tale so far and we are all anxious to read more. Soon we hope!

You driving me crazy cant let me dick go. I want to fuck your sister. Damn u did all of this i hope u fucked her good. You have good self control because after she rode my hard on it will be to late

huhhhh... what a story!!! i had never followed any series before but couldn't miss this Pure Heart series... gr8 dude u've a amazing talent of storytelling... looking for more from u!

WOW!!! I am just loving this story. I cant wait to continue reading all the chapters.

Very well written. So much so, you are sucked right into the story.

And a great romance

hah your the same person who wrote OUR SHARED BATHROOM!!!

that was one of the first stories i read from this site!!!it's been like 4months that i've been hooked on this and both stories just amazing!!

bravo

Awesome story

awesome

you have an amazing talent when it comes to good writing. by far my favorite author on literotica!!!

ooooooohhhhhhh yummy yummy fucked my ommy

Damn! This is Scorching!

And to think that this is just Part 2.

Can't wait for the rest.

I'd better go read that now.

You my friend .. are a magician with words , with literary skills as your wand

I for one, and I'm sure many readers will agree with me, am extremely appreciative of you for taking the time to build up the sexual tension as a natural progression of their love and affection for each other. I'm sure all the subsequent chapters will be even better!

Brilliant, this love affair has become unstoppable now, and yet the pace is so perfect, so real, and so erotic!

bit on lust side more than love but it still a good story. am sure the story is going to be better and better and few heart breaks.

Don't get me wrong, a good buildup is a great thing but it's starting to really strain credibility that they have crossed a line and still seem to be mainly marking time without progressing towards real lovemaking the way any real young persons would have done by now.

Onwards to part 3 now.

I think its slow because he keeps acting like a twelve year old kid. Really, jacking off in your underwear?! He's not a little boy, any guy would have whipped it out and jacked off right in front of her, sister or no. ....and going days without wanking? I dont think so! He pretty much flat lied to her from the beginning anyway, acting like he had to watch porn to get off, like he doesnt do it evety time he's in the shower!

'Brother! Im shocked! Porn? You're watching porn! I'm so dissapointed in you. Let me help you brother, you don't need to corrupt yourself with that porn. We all know its just a substitute for not being able to have sex, so just come on over here to my room and get a big ole cup of incest! I'll break you of that nassy habit, now get my panties off and quit hiding your dick in your boxers like a little boy!'

Lol.

Written with exquisite taste and Sensibility. Highly erotic yet beautiful.

I love you're writing style, this was a great read. Thank you.

Hot!!!!!!

5/5

At last !!