All Comments on 'Journey of the Warrior Ch. 03'

by Roadbug

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I've been waiting....

and was pleased to see the latest addition to this tale. Please, continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More, More, and More

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
more plz

I can't wait for the next chapter. PLease hurry, not that i am rushing you but i can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hopfully you will continue this story line

Hope you are just taking a short break, and will soon continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good story

I hope you decide to continue with it

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOT DAMN,u have to write more Roadbug.I have read alot of stories like this and I can truthfully say ur's is one of the best,I mean u really REALLY HAVE to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
love it

need more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Absolutely Awesome Story

you definitely have skill with words. i was hooked through all 4 chapters so far, please continue this story. and continue to write.

RavenNightcloudRavenNightcloudabout 14 years ago
great story!

i have read these four chapters of your story many times now and still never tire of it, awesome work please continue it!!!

watchercdbwatchercdbover 13 years ago
great

This is a great story please continue it is would be a shame to let the story die

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

very good (not rearly a fitting comment but i would love to read more)

you should think about trying a publisher with this

katgoddesskatgoddessover 13 years ago
More!

This is a really good story! You have real talent. I hope you will continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very enjoyable

thats a good story im interested in reading more though the last few paragraphs made it seem like the lady of the forest was playing them and had taken a mortal coil as gods sometimes do

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More, PLEASE

You have a defined talent, and it would be unkind at best to not finish this story out. You've created a yearning, a hunger in your readers to know the end, and beyond. Please finish it. Thank you.

ScifiantScifiantover 12 years ago
More please!

This has been a great story so far, and has the potential to become an even greater series. Please consider answering the pleas of you readers and continue with the series.

RavenNightcloudRavenNightcloudover 11 years ago
please finish the story!!!

just re-read the first 4 parts of your story for the umpteenth time, and still love it. please dont leave it unfinished, it really is worth completing!

cylinderlitcylinderlitover 11 years ago
the suspense is killing me!

Please continue I desperately want to know how it continues. Does the sword (the really ancient one) have a spirit type essence that just moved on the the daughter? Does the daughter now know how to use a sword in it's fullness thanks to the blue light? Is Bear (the enemy champion from ch. 00 ) join the group? So many questions left hanging!

Chev1Chev1almost 11 years ago
Very good story - looking forward to more

Great start.. leaves you wanting for more!

Only thing I can suggest is to have an editor to edit your story. (the consistent use of words like except instead of accept, and a few others which were annoying) This doesn't detract too much from my enjoyment in reading your story though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WHANT MORE

WHANT MORE

lavar69lavar69almost 11 years ago
Awesome story

I could not agree more with the other comments, great story, can't wait for the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
sad...

This story is wonderful and had so much promise. However, since there hasn't been a new chapter in almost five years, I'm guessing we will never get to see where this adventure could have gone.... so sad!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice

The writing is very prolix and considering the predictable action perhaps a sort of harem is not a very appropriate choice but i think remain nice the same so i'm curious to read the next chapters.

Note:

I'm glad that until now you have avoided adding sexual parts to concentrate on the story, if in the future you will put some of them, I hope will be well developed without forcing it on the story.

auhunter04auhunter04over 10 years ago
editing

a fine tale you are weaving which has possibilities of great expanse.

I offer this bit of advice--read your work backwards at least once. It will help you find better words and awkward usages

In working your craft, forget not Simon, he can have a great role to play

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalabout 10 years ago

Interesting, but stilted. The dialogue comes across as odd and uncomfortable. The scenes are poorly described.

Lots of potential and looking forward to seeing what happens.

kjohns2001kjohns2001over 8 years ago
{{{SIGH}}}

Roadbug has earned a name just as did those in this story. His name should be master of the unfinished story!!! I loved the story even with it's spelling and grammatical faults, but it is just downright cruel to start such compelling stories and then let them just come to a screeching halt leaving his readers hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
argh

I have now learned after reading this to always go to the last page of the last chapter of all stories I read. Too see if there are any comments stating that it is an unfinished story. So I know not to bother reading them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Story

Why didn't you finish it????

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Is there going to be any more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Please write more of this one I loved reading it

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

More please

JohnnyWolf71JohnnyWolf71over 3 years ago

Please, the story cannot end here.

drycreeksdrycreeksabout 3 years ago

Seems like this is the . So sad u didnt finish it. It was a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

more please a good story please finish it

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