homeErotic HorrorLair of the Carter BrothersPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Lair of the Carter Brothers

byAbdulbenthere©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/01/08

Sweet!

This was a really lovely story! Please, submit more. I will take you at your word that this is not the end!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by cheesy80s10/01/08

Good, solid writing...

I enjoyed the premise, although you seemed to have rushed through this somewhat, which took an edge off the tension. Her escape was pretty easy as well.

I loved Katie's delerium dreams as well. I thought that added a psychological aspect to this. I do believe it could have been played up even more to encompass some internal struggles she was having on sin and faith in the face of unimaginable horror.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/29/13

Epic

You did a very good job it was an amazing story and i hope to hear more soon!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Lair of the Carter Brothers  or
More submissions by Abdulbenthere.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel