All Comments on 'Lovers at the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Writer needs guidance

Although the story may be interesting, the writer needs to get guidance on proper writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
gave up

just couldn't get into a story where the characters lack names and the sentences lack punctuation

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