All Comments on 'Daughter & Her Friends Ch. 1'

by L.A. Wicker

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WoodButcher57WoodButcher57over 15 years ago
You're writing

very enjoyable.

inherholeinherholealmost 14 years ago
Daddies girls,

Daddy loved little girls with FFF tits and had gotten her pregnant the first time when she was twelve and married her. The following year she had twin girls in January and another one for Christmas. By the time she was twenty-one she had twenty daughters. Like their mother they all started growing breast when they reach ten and were FFF's by twelve. Mother wanted them all to feel what it was like to have a man that loved them start putting children in them at twelve so she talked her husband into making each of their daughters a woman. Mom loved being pregnant and continued to have children right along with her daughters. I, Joan40I, love having my husband in me and love having each of our daughters enjoying his cock also.

dliterdliterover 13 years ago
Why not?

Good story but could have had a lot more life details and an explanation as to why Lisa can't have any children. What is wrong with her, and can't she be helped?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fishing stories

If you make your dick a little bit shorter it could be a lot more believable. Plus ...3 girls , each 4 children equal 12 children...C'mon man ...at least try to be a little bit closer to reality ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Stupid

He was getting home late, went straight by her room, threw the guy out, then was magically wearing a towel.

Welp, that's the end of that.

dezurtdawgdezurtdawgover 8 years ago
better late than...

Besides what the other comments had to say, you surprised me on the first sentence. You wrote "...lived alone sense my wife left..." The correct word should have been "since". Check your dictionary and you'll see the difference. Didn't stop me from reading it though.

dezurtdawg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
awful

Terrible. Get someone to check your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
SUPERB INCEST

Having kids withe daughter and her friends is super HOT. KUDOS DAD.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
continuity

How did the dad go from getting home late, kicking the shit out of some kid, and end up in a towel?

Story line just doesn't work.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 2 years ago

Nice story. AAAA+++

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Ah the joys of a teenage harem, so sad for Lisa. A great start, looking forward to seeing where you go from here. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a piece of shit story this is. Dad comes home late to hear his daughter refusing to open her legs for some guy, bursts in on them to find the guy with a knife at his daughter’s neck and dad punishes his daughter?? A knife at her neck means she’s being raped. Any sane father would immediately assume the rapist was at fault, not his daughter. And leaving the rapist in his truck without tying him up is stupid; let the rapist escape why doncha? And somehow the father goes from entering the house to get a shower, to hearing his daughter refusing the rapist, to throwing the rapist across the room hard enough to sink his head into the wall - which would have killed or paralyzed him, to dragging the rapist out to his truck, to then demanding his daughter get to the bathroom to shower the filth off AND that’s when his towel falls off? Bullshit. How’d he get into the towel in the first place? Clearly his intent was to take a shower but it was interrupted by hearing his daughter being raped. He never had time to get out of his clothes before rescuing his daughter. And then to brag about how much of a man he is because he’s got a 12” cock? How infantile! The size of one’s cock does not a man make. 1 star for this crap story. 👎

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A little far fetched of a storyline, but please find & use spellcheck!

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