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Daughter & Her Friends Ch. 1

byL.A. Wicker©
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by Anonymous

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by WoodButcher5709/29/08

You're writing

very enjoyable.

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by inherhole05/02/10

Daddies girls,

Daddy loved little girls with FFF tits and had gotten her pregnant the first time when she was twelve and married her. The following year she had twin girls in January and another one for Christmas. By the time she was twenty-one she had twenty daughters. Like their mother they all started growing breast when they reach ten and were FFF's by twelve. Mother wanted them all to feel what it was like to have a man that loved them start putting children in them at twelve so she talked her husband into making each of their daughters a woman. Mom loved being pregnant and continued to have children right along with her daughters. I, Joan40I, love having my husband in me and love having each of our daughters enjoying his cock also.

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by dliter11/18/10

Why not?

Good story but could have had a lot more life details and an explanation as to why Lisa can't have any children. What is wrong with her, and can't she be helped?

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by Anonymous10/05/11

Fishing stories

If you make your dick a little bit shorter it could be a lot more believable. Plus ...3 girls , each 4 children equal 12 children...C'mon man ...at least try to be a little bit closer to reality ...

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by Anonymous10/18/11

Stupid

He was getting home late, went straight by her room, threw the guy out, then was magically wearing a towel.

Welp, that's the end of that.

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by dezurtdawg01/07/16

better late than...

Besides what the other comments had to say, you surprised me on the first sentence. You wrote "...lived alone sense my wife left..." The correct word should have been "since". Check your dictionary and you'll see the difference. Didn't stop me from reading it though.

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by Anonymous03/31/16

awful

Terrible. Get someone to check your work.

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