All Comments on 'Lynn's Alley Ch. 05'

Loved it...want more... you have a talent, thank you... maybe a little more detail in the sex scenes?... drag your readers in to the way it feels... "when the sweat runs down your body like flux on a hot metal" etc... not a criticism really, but like everything humanly created, it could be improved upon.

"Air Force One had a helluva view"

'Blue Tarp Blues' by Sonny Landreth

I watched the tragedy on CNN in Cardiff (another delta city), grieved for New Orleans & its people.

5* every chapter, thanks for sharing.

Dixon (UK)