Not quite sure where this story is heading but thats the fun of reading...you never know...I will say I don't think of you as a slut but I will say that you've done a very good job of writing the story the way you have done...
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Anonymous09/30/08
A good start
but too short. ch 2 hopefully will be longer.
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Anonymous09/30/08
Good start
Its rare to see good english come from an Indian author. Hope you do something great with the story.
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Anonymous10/03/08
Bravo
Great conflict and anguish. I feel she has a past. Would love to see it developed beautifully.
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Anonymous07/10/11
Great begining of a good story
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Anonymous07/21/11
An entirly new vision
Very well written on an entirely new vision. Keep on writing in the same slow heating effect.
English
Sounds interesting
Not quite sure where this story is heading but thats the fun of reading...you never know...I will say I don't think of you as a slut but I will say that you've done a very good job of writing the story the way you have done...
A good start
but too short. ch 2 hopefully will be longer.
Good start
Its rare to see good english come from an Indian author. Hope you do something great with the story.
Bravo
Great conflict and anguish. I feel she has a past. Would love to see it developed beautifully.
Great begining of a good story
An entirly new vision
Very well written on an entirely new vision. Keep on writing in the same slow heating effect.
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