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Ruined
Interesting, nicely paced and then plummeted into absolute rubbish, exemplified by "A few courteous people applauded her." What a waste of a potentially good story.
Loved it
That person doesnt know what there talking about, i love reading the story where the woman comes so much and evryone gets to enjoy it. It was her first time coming damm i would love to come like that myself. Can't wait for more just loved it so.
LOVED IT 2
This was a great story that leaves lots of story lines for the future - looking forward to the cruise
LOVED IT 2
This was a great story that leaves lots of story lines for the future - looking forward to the cruise
So sexxxyyyyyy!!
Read one of your previous stories and was hooked... i checked out this one and was not disappointed! As I said younger men are vastly over-rated and I wish I could find a creatively sexy older man like you... to have you do naughty things to and make me cummm like the women in your stories .. Yumm!!! Keep writing!!!
OMG mmm
I know exactly how it feels for this woman. I'm the same way when I squirt and it makes it impossible not to wear panties. Damn mmm I'm so wet right now and it's only ch.1 ok..i'm shhhing...must read more.
last 2 posters
I'd be more than happy to help either of you with your problem:)
As usual I loved your story. You seem to be one of the better writers I have encountered on Literotica. Since i found you I have now read every story but this one, and i loved them all.
Next time I see a Star Bucks I will think about Tina and your dexterous and brazenly public ability.
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How often do you get comped ?
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