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Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!
I was just wondering the other day when we'd see a new chapter of this one, then when I logged on, there it was! :)
Update!?
I saw the update and thought I'd check back in. (Stopped reading after Chap. 5 - forgot b/c of the uppdate duration) I guess Kate just it too focused to see Rafe and his love for her. Perhaps I'll check back after a few more chapters. Story's going too slow and just hard when people don't get it. Thanks and I'll look forward to reading the end. Lakergirl
About time!!!!
REALLY REALLY GOOD. But PLEASE dont take so long for the next chapter to come out!
beautiful
OMG, i love all your stories so much.
you are one of the most talented writers i've ever read!!!
def don't wait so long to post more, of this story and the others.
Well done
more
more more more!!! i want more, dont stop dont stop now!!
Love your writing, but...
I was a little confused with Jerome. You said that he had grown up in the slums of Boston, or at least he knew of them - and then the others had to explain to him about the gangs and that he should change his clothing. Useful for exposition, but it does seem inconsistent.
WOW!
I just found this story, and I'm ABSOLUTELY love it. I had me hooked from the first moment. I cannot wait for more. Please, please don't leave us waiting too look, I read the whole thing in a couple of days thinking it was done, and now I find that they're more! LOL. I'm so excited, but the wait is going to kill me, I just know it. LOL, great job! Off to check out more of your stories now :)
Thanks
Great story indeed.
I was specially amazed when a simple silence changed everything. "See? No reason. Rafe".
Oh that was good.
Thank you very much.
Glad Kate is back
Another great chapter. I'm always thrilled when a new one is posted. Thanks for a great read!
Wow!
Just happened to be browsing and came across this story and now I can't stop. I can't wait for the next chapter. I got to the end and wanted to keep going but there was no more!!! Keep up the great work!!
Loved it!
Please write more, can't whait!!!
More PLEASE
Excellent writing! Loved it! Please continue this story!!! SOOOOON!
Absolutely captivating.
Its absolutely captivating! Please continue with it soon,I'M BEGGING YOU!
Fantastic
I couldn't stop until the end. Please finish the story. I was hooked from the very beginning. Nothing better than a love hate relationship. Your a great writer and I would by the book for sure.
3:38am
i read the whole thing until 3:38 in the morning. please finish the story =]
433 with 2 hrs sleep
lol i beat ya ... 433 am with two hours sleep and a 4 yr old rising in 2 hours ... but i couldnt stop. i think ill find rafe and set a bounty for the remainder of this story .. omg you can write ... wow
Gee
WHAT'S TAKING SO LONG? You're so freaking talented, just write the next chapter already! Don't leave all us pathetic souls hanging!
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