All Comments on 'Drill Sergeant Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
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MORE!!!!! more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
It's getting hot in here

your story sounds like it could b a scorner,continue please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
radio 101.1 the beat

i was the fan of the prince of england.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very hot!

Sometimes it is better when the details are left to ones own imagination. This story was so because the premiss was well written with a subtle undertone of manliness and sex. Nothing too overt, just hanging heavily in the air. The final shower scene was perfect. We all know how to have sex with a man and what we like to happen...it doesn't have to be spelled out in second by second detail. All the pieces were there' and hot. I loved finishing the story off in my own private video booth in my head.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wish there was a part two

It’s been more than 10 years, but I wish there was a part two

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Man, I wish this continued. Love the Vietnam setting: and how the two genuinely are getting to know each other over drinks. Ring of masculine authenticity.

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