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Very Clever!
Really good T! What a wicked twist.
Great tale
You shall henceforth be called the master of twists ... Really enjoyable piece, well done.
Good luck in the contest!
Very good, very creepy
I did love the twist at the end...
Weird
A very weird and creepy story but very well written. I hope it wins.
Oh boy!
That was a trip! Well written and I must say that you mind is even more warped that ever, congratulations!
*Snerk*
Muahahahaha. Beautiful. Great Read. You trip me out, dude. Loved it!
hee-hee
That's what happens when you think with the wrong head :)
funny...
very good twist, great story!
Deliciously wicked.
I just love all the hidden doors of your mind.
Never a disappointment
You never disappoint me, especially this time of year! :)) Good luck in the contest!
Great!
Cruelly funny twist. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
No words
. . . could really express my reaction to this story. Very well done, Tom.
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