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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve09/29/08

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This poem seems more poetic than some of your previous ones -- ivy on brick/like hesitant hummingbirds/rain on a fallow field.

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by Sapphos Sister06/15/09

A beautiful awakening

I like v much. well done.

Fx

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