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You and beentowne fiction boy both write idiot nonsense and call it lit. It's fucking junk, wasted space, internet garbage.
It is NOT junk!!
Everyone has a right to their opion.Previous commentor should be more constuctive with the critisism instead of being an ignorant fool. I for one found your story sweet and refreshing. It would make a good series using all their adventures. Don't give up I will be waiting and hoping for more chapters.Thank you for the good read. SR
very good one
a very good story, shows you have a flare for writing and have done good research before writing this story! good work , keep it up. I am a Hindu living in India and I think even Indian writers would not be able to write this story better.
please leave goddesses out of these stories
i am a hindu and therefore request the authorities to remove this story about two of our most reverred gods.i am fully aware that the author has full rights to express himself on this site. but i would just request him to remove the story and thereby refrain from hurting the sentiments of hindus .
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