The only thing I would say is that there needs to be a bit more descriptive text regarding movement. One moment he invites her over and the next line she is there. It's just a bit jarring.
I just loved how he took her on a trip before The Trip.. to find her inner whore-goddess-woman ...where oh where do I find an older lover like this?? Liked the pace and it is ok that not every single step they take is described! When you have orgasms and sex on your mind do you recall the steps that lead you to heaven? Hell NO!
Fuck me now, just like that. WOW.. I need a man like this. mmm oopsy couldn't hold my shhhing haha i needed to comment. Ok. fuck I need a towel but i'm moving onto Ch.3 lol
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Nice
Very, very nice. I enjoyed it.
The only thing I would say is that there needs to be a bit more descriptive text regarding movement. One moment he invites her over and the next line she is there. It's just a bit jarring.
LOVEDDD IT!!
I just loved how he took her on a trip before The Trip.. to find her inner whore-goddess-woman ...where oh where do I find an older lover like this?? Liked the pace and it is ok that not every single step they take is described! When you have orgasms and sex on your mind do you recall the steps that lead you to heaven? Hell NO!
OMG
Fuck me now, just like that. WOW.. I need a man like this. mmm oopsy couldn't hold my shhhing haha i needed to comment. Ok. fuck I need a towel but i'm moving onto Ch.3 lol
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