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A Night's Tale Ch. 02

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by Anonymous10/03/08

Watch your transitions

When you switched from the vampire to the victim, it gave a bit of a mental whiplash, as you didn't bother to tell us you were changing point of reference.

Overall, a very nice story.

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by Anonymous01/12/09

I love this chaacter

Heather deserves a series of her own A long one like the million dollar Slaves series. Thanks for your stories.

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by Anonymous10/23/13

Prey

"The hunting was good between the tourists and the immigrants and the homeless there was a never ending supply of people that nobody noticed or cared enough about to complain if they went missing." I bet she's a Republican or if a Brit botes BNP lol

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