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Yikes
You are really pitiful
What a piece of dog shit!
Hmmm, another boring & predictable sad story of an unrealistic wimp idiot and the adventures of a complete slut/whore. Wow, have not seen any of this type of story in the last 6 months! Whew, we are grateful not to have to suffer through another Bonnie Taylor & fucked up side kick series. Granted if this piece of dog shit effort had any type of plot or character development - there might be a reason not to totally despise it, but atlas, the author short-comings are profusely evident. Get real and please do not continue this piss-poor effort!
decent
good cuckold story
didn't even bother to finish.
complete stranger kisses girl, drools over her, then asks them to dinner and they go... STOP READING RIGHT THERE. AUTHOR IS TOO FUCKING LAZY TO TAKE A FEW MINUTES TO COME UP WITH SOMETHING EVEN FAINTLY, EVEN SLIGHTLY REMOTELY BELEIVABLE! WHAT A WASTE. After the guy lets this all happen... HE DESERVES TO HAVE EVERY ONE FUCK HIS GIRL, SO WHY WOULD WE CARE?
You sad little man.
No 'loving wife' here. Just a slut. And a less than human male who gets off doing what he does. Erotic? not on your life!
Loved it!
Ohhh... These comments are so predictable, and so incredibly boring.
Why do these people bother to read stories they know they will hate? Now, THAT is pathetic.
Great story!
Anon below me...
Ohhh... comments like the one below, are so predictable, and so incredibly boring. Why do these people bother to repeat the same comments on the same people they disagree with and hate? Are they afraid of the truth? Now, THAT is pathetic. The story is anothe crappy replica of the same boring formula. It is as erotic as the phone book.
A weird phenomenon
All this aggression. Why?
These people hate stories of older black men taking young women. But they read them and love to tell the world how much they hate them.
You need to a depth psychologist to have a well-founded opinion on this phenomenon.
But boring? Oh yes. Indeed.
"It's already too late..."
Loved the massage scene and the reveal of the penetration. Ignore the haters, and keep writing!
"It's already too late..."
I Loved when she tells him it's too late. In fact, I enjoyed the whole massage scene and the reveal of the penetration. Ignore the haters, and keep writing!
I just love the comments on comments....
You know the ones. The ones that stand up for the right to let someone else fuck thier women. The cucks, swingers and lesser men will love this story and I guess the commentators giving the top scores are the cucks, swingers and wimps. good luck to you all.
What do you people want from Samuelx??
Why he, it? changes the penname for different stories which are all badly writen I don't know, but the style of garbage is unmistakeable.
you should have just left the bitch the first time
It's a well written story about a sorry pussy of a man, no wonder the little slut would fuck someone else. Any man that has any balls at all would have bashed the old guys brains out with the wine bottle, and then kicked the little slut to the curb. Rich
Great stuff
Those who ridicule folks who write or like these stories lack maturity and confidence in their own masculinity or sexuality.
(Mostly) Very Good!
I think this was a very well-written story - right up there with the best of them! Well done! However......
I couldn't help but feel 'betrayed' by the way you ended the story. You spent 95% of the time catering to, shall we say, 'the average hot-blooded male' - and then you suddenly switch completely over and start catering to what I assume to be a small minority of readers. In any literary work - not only erotica - this is usually not a good idea.
You obviously spent a lot of time and effort building up the tension, developing the story - and then, for me at least, you blew it completely at the end. Maybe I should have been warned by the title - but still.... A good story, but spoiled by the ending.
fun to read
I got really turned on by this story, I enjoyed most the sneaky penetration part. It was well told, easy to read and entertaining. I don't get the "lily white" John Wayne rage. I've never read a story by any one other than a white man who enjoys watching his woman get fucked by another man especially with a big black cock. So what else is new?
Good buildup
The early part of the story was a little long-winded and the end a bit of a letdown, but the massage scene was definitely well done!
Would love to see more
My favorite moment, aside from the reveal of the penetration, was the whispers the two shared, concealed by the music - little words that we'll never hear. Speaking of which, I think you should have played up the suspicion a bit more - specifically suspicion that the girlfriend was actually into it and was consenting. The narrator seems to think it's all against her will, but it doesn't all seem that way, and he seems like a bit of a dope for not even considering the possibility that she wanted it. A good read regardless!
Great story.
I also lived with a small, sexy oriental woman who liked to be in control. I had to accept visits from her ex-boss, a very commanding, older Chinese man. She needed his domination and I was reduced to watching them.. She taunted me for becoming so helplessly aroused by it all.
Hope you write some more.
Almost 12 yo fantasy hey
Really stupid. Dated her two more years why. She is a fuck toy that denied you, no reason to have anything to do with it.
WTF
It seems, all of these interracial stories that involve a black man and white woman, always have the white husband or boyfriend to be a wimp and perverted by getting erections and masturbating while watching his woman get fucked by a black guy.
Where in reality, the husband or boyfriend would have smashed the black guy's head in and kicked her slutty ass to the kerb.
But, I forgot a lot of cuckholds are probably reading these stories and wanking off.
ignore the insults - this story is HOT!
Just wanted to thank you for the story. I really loved it! ;-0)
mmmm
yum
fucked up bye a black fucker
as Both my lady & I are swingers. it was well writen but my lady didn't like the way it went. That the lady had no class in doing what she did to her man. She let a older black guy fuck her in front of her man. And didn't stop when he asked her. Sorry but she said that was very low sulty . If they where both swingers it would have been ok. but this way no !! He should just leave her there and tell bye
As for me I like the action but didn't like the way the old fucker did it. If it had been me I'd have told them both to get out & for her to not come back
It turns me on!
THis story is so incredibly hot and a super turn on for me!
I need a black man to **** me too. way deep!
I need to get this right from you, iwallbt...
If I call you in front of a crowd "Wimp", you will come and shake my hand because you think you are truly one, right?
If your wife, daughter, girlfriend got gang raped, you will get an erection, right? If I say you bring "shame" to your father, mother, sister .... you will think "shame" = "honor", right?
The country is really proud of you and your kind, trust me.
What a
pathetic story.
Great Stuff
Great story, though the dialog is a little too technical some times. Words like "penis", "deposited" and "semen" just aren't things people say when they're excited. In fact, those words are probably only used often in hospitals.
This isn't a swinger story, really. This is directed at cuckolds, which requires abuse, teasing and domination. For the target audience, this was very well done and impressive how gradually you built up the action with such a long story.
One tip for dealing with the critics: just shut off the Anonymous Comments option. The racists who read interracial stories just to insult the author about the content rather than the quality of the writing, though they call you a coward, ironically they are the biggest cowards of all. Anyone who hides behind anonymity while hurling insults has no right to call himself a man.
Good story man, fuck this other guy!
Good story really liked it. Thanks :)
I am not really into the final part, but I can appreciate that some are into that kind of thing.
A favorite
I've returned to this story a number of times since first reading it ... It needs a bit of an edit, yes, but it always, always gets me hard. I'd love to read tales of this couple's ongoing adventures.
just a comment
I didn't read it rather thought, the guy can just leave her ass behind and she can do whatever and whomever. 2 years ? and he didn't do something affirmative? One can only hope he learned what NOT to do.
Damn
You are sick, exactly why would you even talk to her again, just send her home with Tom to raise little bastards
yuk
Fuck the race mixing bitch off, your better off. once you go black we don't want you back.
Luved ur story
I wouldnt have been able to contain myself. As I LUV a HUGE BLACK COCK & CUMMMMMM. My ex is a BBC SIZE QUEEN. Her & her BBC BULLS trained me to be able to suck their awesomely huge cocks balls deep till i was swallowin their hott thick cummm. She didnt like to suck cock soo she trained me to. They all luved how hard & pre-cummm droolin my lil dick would get as soon I saw their BBC to say nothing about suckin them deep down my throat . I would cummmm all over myself while i was gettin my throat fucked...cummmthirsty
good
i actually thought the story was really well written - really sexy. great work!
I'm in love with Nikki!!!
WOW! Nikki sounds like the most perfect woman on earth!
If only I was her b/f. Damn, you should have married her and become her cuckolded husband for life dude!
REALLY GOOD STORY
AUTHOR, I LOVED YOUR STORY 100%.
TO THE ANONYMOUS PRICKS LEAVING STUPID FEEDBACK - GO FUCK EACH OTHER!
re: cumslutclaire
No you fucking slut whore. Go fuck yourself.
Excellent Story
Really enjoyed the story.
The sexual tension built up from applying the lotion while the boy friend watches to Tom's fucking the hot young girl was exquisite.
I
Well written story. Congratulations.
Fuck off nikki u cheap whore, good story made me angry now I'm just going to rape more of these sluts cos that's all there worth
Whores like Nikki deceivers a whole lot of revenge. And bastards like Tom deceive to be tied to a chair and castrated...
a GF cant cuck she can only cheat
he is mentally unstable or would never have touched her again much less eat her and a fitting punishment for her would hav been for him to vomit all over her snatch and her body.To many diseases out there to put your mouth where someone else has been and the source hasnt been tested.
i'll never get why people leave rude comments on cuckold stories because they're not a fan of the subject. especially when it's in the goddamn title, so there's no way they read it by mistake.
oh,...if true she is sick to torcher her boy friend before and after the big scene,and 53 year old is just as sick,the boy friend should of held her well the big dick was shoved all the way in that cock tease
BEING A CUCK IS NOT THE LEAST OR LAST OF YOUR PROBLEMS
she already has you henpecked and pussywhipped. TK U MLJ LV NV
kill her
no, really...
Great story!!
Fantastic! I want my gf to sleep with an old man while I like his cum
TOM THE KING
A very exciting story. Have read and fantasized over it many times. Would love to have been there as Tom slowly eased his huge dick into the virgin pussy. will read other entries from this author if I can find them.
I am bi-sexual and have swallowed cum and would probably enjoy the new experience of eating cum from out of the pussy after sex was finished and even cleaning up the big black cock.
Thr writer is a coward
This story should end with Jimmy the faggot killing himself. pathetic story. But the writer is a faggot coward loser
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