Storm Riders

Great story

Told with a twinkle in the eye, masterfully executed and very entertaining.
Good luck in the contest!

Nice!

Good one, I love that undertone of smartass! You still write a hot one Tx.

Enjoyable read

Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

It's an ill wind that blows no good. :)

An good read with fine writing. Good luck in the contest.

very nice story...

enjoyed reading it...

Surprising!

Awesome plot! Great storyline, good job. I was held in suspense as new info was revealed. I was a little let down with stage settings, and logistics. "We cuddled in bed, ... then we fucked hard right there in the kitchen floor..." I never would have guessed fairies, elves, ect would enter this story. I was looking for more witches... "and then they vanished..." Good twist! I also like how their cum caused his 'sex organs' (cock and tongue) to swell. Thats awesome! Good luck

great read

nice plot

Really enjoyed this!

It would be great to hear more about them! A tall tale well spun...like your writing!

Did you originally write this story for a Halloween contest?

I was expecting the three witches from Macbeth, but your concept was better. Certainly more erotic.