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You got a lot of hate there, dude! It's hard to get past the subject matter, but your poem DOES evoke strong feelings. I think that the poem itself is too wordy and could be refined a lot. You should concentrate on finding the right WORD, instead of using a sentence. With some changes you will get you point across much better.
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you need to read what you wrote. You have a terrible amount of hatred towards women as evidenced by this poem and many of your stories. You really dont have a clue, do you? about your own anger or you simply ignore it. You are so full of anger and hatred. Let me let you in on something... Bigotry isnt just a white phenomenom.
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