All Comments on 'Hot Bath Ch. 02'

about time you added another chapter it was good but needs more i hope it doesn't take as long this time and it would be nice if it was longer we wait so long and all we get is three minutes worth of reading

i like this chapter although i would like it even more if you could tell us more about their feelings. does he love her? does he feel guilty about it? what about her? does she feel the same? you know the usual bro/sis romantic love. :D thanks for the chapter.

quality and in the lack of coherant presentation (Pardon my spelling)

why would he go home when he knew she would be there and if he did he sure wouldn't hang around he would be in his room with the door locked and avoid her at all costs keep it realistic please