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Loving it
Keep it coming, can't wait for the next chapter
great stuff!!!!!
Well, I'm no dummy: "OMG, that was absolutely fantastic!"
:-P So, now I have a slave for life; cool!
Seriously, this story is continuing to be delightful. Keep the new chapters coming.
-- KK in Texas
FANTASTIC!
I think you are doing a great job so far! Loving everything about it! Maybe a touch longer chapters though. Cant wait for the next part!
ATTENTION:
Hey guys. I've said this before and I'm saying it again. This story isn't going to develop into a slave/BDSM one. Trust me when I say that. I also know that Kistle has been rather passive so far, but give her time. Imagine yourself as a young nun with no knowledge of the world - you'd be a little passive, too. So, as the plot furthers I promise you a more fiesty heroine and maybe, a softer hero. Thanks to everyone who voted and commented!
Loving it
Still lovely and wonderful. Keep it coming :)
No it was not "OMG this is fantastic"
It was bloody incredible that's what! Just hurry soon with the next chapter please, lol.
i so cannot wait 4 the next one!!!
The build up is killing me! ... when is the next part coming out???
Thanks for the heads-up
This is fantastic and has great potential. Great to read that you do not equate sci-fi/fantasy with rape/BDSM. Keep up the good work!
SO UNFAIR!
Wen's the next part coming out? Its so unfair to make us wait an entire month to find out what happens next!! .... We're dying out here!!!
OMG, that was absolutely fantastic!
:D
Amazing!
You keep commenting about how you're going to have the sex come shortly. I really don't think it's necessary. Your chapters so far have been perfect in length, and while there isn't any sex, they are wonderfully written with promises of great sex ahead. Waiting for great sex is much much better than getting shoddy sex. I will be looking forward to reading the rest of this, and to find other stories you've written.
OMG, that was absolutely fantastic!"
Ask and you shall receive... brilliant story line can't wait to read more
Omg
Absolutely love it!!, :-)
No rape in this story? I beg to differ...
Rade gave his men permission to force themselves on the nuns--that is rape, period. And the way his 2nd in command took Ginny--she gave in because he told her he would rape her if she didn't.
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