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WOW!
excellent work never thought human/plant sex would turn me on but you proved me wrong
At last!
I bow to you in thanks, this is just the sort of thing I've been hunting for, and you have written it WELL!
I seek fantasy erotica outside the norm, either breaking gender boundries or with non-humans. It's hard to find such stuff that isn't full of bad punctuation and gramma.
Thank you so much!
Gryphalcon (soon to sign up)
Good, as far as it goes
This would be a lot better a story if you did two things:
1. Not do the stupid "trail off" ending -- this is a fucking smut site; you cut your story off right before what could have been an incredibly hot scene. Stupid.
2. The actual scene of Mary getting impregnated is incredibly short. Well written, but way way way too short.
read this
Please add part 2 where Naomi Carries the plants back to the states. And once she's there the plants start spreading
sad
This is so hot. But sad in that she can never fuck again. As much pleasure as the plant has given her, with the vines coming out of her the plant's male organ can never fertilize her again. Naomi should stay in the Amazon. Taking her pregnancy to the U.S. would only subject the growing life to scientific probes or poisons and her to public humiliation. You should have had the plant remain attached at the navel, leaving her vagina free to be used again, or for the new Naomi to eat on while the plant impregnates her also from behind.
Very interesting.
I'm anxious to read more of this story.
Don't hesitate to write a second chapter ;-)
beautiful story
The women get released at some time as Mary saw them slip into the forest. Would love to read a part 2, its a very poignant story.
agreed
anonymous is right. Permanent attachment should be at the navel. After all, it is where the umbilical cord was once attached to her. AND Naomi should remain in the Amazon where she can avoid the sprays and other toxins we use to kill plants that are unwanted or unproductive. Mary and Naomi can propogate in the Amazon safely. My womb is barren but maybe I could be used by this plant to reproduce it's own self. I have the eggs, they just don't release or something they tell me. I like this, I think I'd like being one of these plant/girls.
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