All Comments on 'Twins Saved by Nudity Ch. 22'

An unbelievable scenario,but made believable by very good writing.This is the first story I have read by this author,and I hope to read many more.

i truely hope that you write more on this story i loved all the characters the plot of the story is fucking excellent can't wait for more

The style and tone of your writng were perfect and I enjoyed all 22 episodes back to back today and feel totally drained myself if you know what I mean!!!!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story read the episodes over 3 days can we have more please!!

I so totally love this story and the characters... am almost sad that you stopped last Fall and I only hope that someday you get the bug to continue with the adventures. I read your Nude Day entry and then found that I had once before read this Twins story. The 2nd reading was as fresh as the first and I can't wait to read more. Thanks so much.

Sublime bliss,two girl friend and I read this together and sexed each other till we all blissed out in to fuck heaven. then started over when we came round, my 8 inch cock had them begging for more and more just like the women in the story. Brill

great series add a chapter about when abby tells tom she fucked his dad im curious to see how that plays out

WOW!!! What a twisted little story you do weave!!! I had to read the whole thing in one sitting, lol, life could wait for a while!

This was a fun story, I love the way the twins were transformed from afraid zombie like girls into confident sexual young woman. A great story thank you I'm sorry in had to end perhaps you might write about those twins trysts in collage?

wow, 22. chapters so far, it looks like you've left a place where you can continue the story, i sinsearly hope that you do, this story is one of the most amazing stories i've ever written, it might be a bit of a long shot, but have you considered turning this whole story and turning it into an erotic novel and selling it ? i think you could sell lots of copies of it if you do decide to write one, just amazing work.

love,love,love family incest,,well written and just soaking with lust and volumes of sex!!

.....you never damn well finished it.

I hate it when stories are never finished.

I apologise for the title but working through the chapters, I don't know if it was my laptop, but there appeared to be 2 of each number and then once on to the story single side isn't brilliant, but a lot of your only seem about 5 sentences long, if its once again my laptop I am sorry

Maybe less chapters with a longer length enabling both the writer and reader to immerse themselves and enjoy everything that much fuller can then walk away happy so to speak

More?

13 years and no follow up? I feel slightly cheated. After staying for 22 chapters I thinks the readers need some closure.

This was an exciting read. I hope there will be more. Maybe everybody goes to a free for all nudit resort.