All Comments on 'Cousin GG'

Only the worst written incest story I have ever read. Needs more detail. More realism. Much more editing. And last but not least, more creativity.

I suspect you should give up writing and do something within your mental capacity, say become a politician or a used car salesman.

i don't agree with the guy below you would be better at flipping burgers because all you need to be able to say is " YOU WANT FRIES WITH THAT". THE STORY SUCKS AND NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED. IF YOU MADE IT THREE OF FOUR TIME LONGER WITH THE PROPER BACKGROUND AND CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND A WHOLE LOT MORE DETAILS PLUS A PROPER ENDDING IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.

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