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name changes
I like your stories, all sex sex and more sex, but I did notice a couple times you referred to Bobby as Donny, and then Bobby's mother, at first you called her Lois, then Audrey. Maybe run your stories by an editor. Other than that, great, keep it up.
get bobby's dad involved
since you seem to be getting bobby involved with different partners...get his until now str8 dad into hot family fun with him...for hottttt bi stud action...maybe even his dad's... until now str8... own dad....for 3 generational fun..and the hottest...get bobby's mom...disclose how turned on to her naked stud son she is...and both now bi dad and mom share bobby for total bi family fun...lose effeminate lance..keep it all bi stud action
10 day vacation
I agree with the first comment about name swapping, but what about the vacation Bobbys parents were supposed to go on. The boys waited till they went to work everyday, but the parents were supposed to be on a cruise
10 day vacation
I agree with the first comment about name swapping, but what about the vacation Bobbys parents were supposed to go on. The boys waited till they went to work everyday, but the parents were supposed to be on a cruise
Got a little repetitive
Good story, but it got a little repetitive between the cousins. Bed, shower, bed, shower... Would have liked to have seen Lance brought into the picture. (Did you have to give him the standad gay porno name, LANCE? LOL) I have to admit I am not a big fan of parental observation.
My Apologies
Sorry about the name confusion. I had intended to say that Ronnie's parents were going on a cruise which is why Ronnie stayed with Bobby and his parents. I will take your other comments into condsideration as well. I didn't think about the selection of the name Lance but bare with me as it would be awkward to change now. Thanks for the feedback!
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