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Absence Ch. 01

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by Anonymous10/09/08

Made me sigh...

of contentment. Built up the feeling gradually parallel to how Jay's lovemaking picking up its pace, put a fulfilling satisfying smile on my Thursday face.

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Your work.

Tony,
Your work is utterly amazing. Your thought process and use of words truly hold a readers mind captivated.
Coming from someone who writes as well all I can say is that as I begin to plant roots in the journeys into the writing world. I hope my work grows to be as well written and as open as your work is. Thus from the writer...

Now from the woman in me....
I sit here breathless, cross eyed and drooling... Please pass me a tissue for my brow...
Nikki AKA. Emmanuelle_Dreams

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