All Comments on 'There Could Be More...'

In the real world, you would be dead.

Great story! Can't wait to see if another story follows.

Thank you , a little more sex could have been included , I thought , but a nice basis for a series , so let's have more !

I enjoyed this very much. Well written and put together. Keep the good work coming.

I am glad to see you are back in the groove. Another fine poly story. Nick always handles these things so well.

I actually had a '59 Vette. I am a little surprised at the millage but, I will admit I don't remembering ever checking the millage. I used to run it on Chevron Supreme @ 0.32C/gal.

I was born and raised in LA and was stationed in Long Beach for a lot of years. Your stories bring back a lot of memories.

A damn good write by one of the better authors on this site.

Mike S.

It doesn't matter to me whether it should have been in bdsm, group, romance, lesbian, first time, or fetish it was a great story and that is the bottom line. Personally I would like to see a category labelled (Any or all of the above) it would stop a lot of the negative comments because the story doesn't follow a paticular genre's format. Thank you for another fantastically woven tale. Dan

this story was wonderful it had a little of everything in it please continue it

No one's world actually revolves that smoothly and that enjoyably - but what a concept

Editorial note - near the bottom of page 3 Selina is part of the conversation then Sara Esta and Nick go off for lunch and Selina just ceases to be a part of the narrative - seemed a bit lost I had to go back and see if I skipped something that explained why she was not there - or anywhere.

However that Nick is doomed to hell in the afterlife - I mean come on shit he is living in an extraordinary Heaven on Earth - his Karma cannot be that good that he does not have to balance it out later LOL

I appreciate the author posting a warning at the beginning of the story regarding the elements contained therein. I didn't read this story, because he said it contains some BDSM, and I just don't have any taste for that sort of thing. It is very frustrating for me to get deep into a story and encounter practices that I find repulsive. Thank you Scorpio, for the warning.

I love your longer length stories which allow your fertile imagination free rein.

I am also a fan of your style of dominance and your relationship with your women.

So many 'doms' seem to think shouting orders and demanding obedience makes them a master. You, however, understand your ability to invite your ladies to offer themselves as your submissives and their readiness to do so shows true dominance.

NOTHING SEXY WHATSOEVER ABOUT BEATING WOMEN....TOTALLY DEGENERATED HOG WASH....

Ilied your story and I hope you will add more to it. I don't think it's finished.