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by soncurious

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Boilerplate

Okay, but nothing special.<p>And tell me, why that abrupt shift to present tense in paragraph #7?<p>Cliché writing and no attention to style = not a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Back to the finger

Try & find a real man because you obviously have not graduated from flicking the budgie

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Short Story***

Thanks.

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