The Author has defined his two main characters,and laid down the preliminary work for the start of a good story, but that is all so far.
We need to know what has caused him and his mother to be in the situation that they are in.
It would be good for the story to have the mother unknownly tease the son by showing some skin or underwear.
Unless the mother is already sexually attracted to her son, it will be a hard stretch to find them in an incestuous relationship, with just the son playing around with her after she has went to sleep. Good Luck and I will be watching for the next chapter....Rich
Your "first chapter" is rather short, it could have been stretched a bit more, but you have caught my attention. I love incest stories -- mother and son -- and I'm hoping you'll stay with this theme.
You certainly have a flair for story-telling. I'm rating you very high and encourage you to continue.
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Anonymous09/30/10
Sweet
An inspired young man watching Mom, please continue
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Anonymous04/26/12
great ass
My wife mother offered me her ass. One morning in her kitchen, while everyone slept. I took it too.
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Anonymous06/30/12
humping
I loved your story it turns me on to read about humping and grinding. I am bi and I used to loved to grind on other girls and now that I am an adult I enjoy grinding, humping and all sorts of adult activities. I used to grind with boys when dancing and loved feeling a hard dick on my ass. I love anal sex also so now I love to feel a hard dick at my asshole when I dance.
I would like a freaky encounter like this in the story happen to me on a train, bus, or elevator...mmmm
English
Too short, what you have is good though
The Author has defined his two main characters,and laid down the preliminary work for the start of a good story, but that is all so far.
We need to know what has caused him and his mother to be in the situation that they are in.
It would be good for the story to have the mother unknownly tease the son by showing some skin or underwear.
Unless the mother is already sexually attracted to her son, it will be a hard stretch to find them in an incestuous relationship, with just the son playing around with her after she has went to sleep. Good Luck and I will be watching for the next chapter....Rich
Good start! Hurry with more!
I enjoyed this! Please continue with more!
Good start! Hurry with more!
I enjoyed this! Please continue with more!
A perversion only if not welcomed!
Your "first chapter" is rather short, it could have been stretched a bit more, but you have caught my attention. I love incest stories -- mother and son -- and I'm hoping you'll stay with this theme.
You certainly have a flair for story-telling. I'm rating you very high and encourage you to continue.
Sweet
An inspired young man watching Mom, please continue
great ass
My wife mother offered me her ass. One morning in her kitchen, while everyone slept. I took it too.
humping
I loved your story it turns me on to read about humping and grinding. I am bi and I used to loved to grind on other girls and now that I am an adult I enjoy grinding, humping and all sorts of adult activities. I used to grind with boys when dancing and loved feeling a hard dick on my ass. I love anal sex also so now I love to feel a hard dick at my asshole when I dance.
I would like a freaky encounter like this in the story happen to me on a train, bus, or elevator...mmmm
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