So would love a sequel to this.
Short and quite humorous.
I loved it because it had exhibitionism and public sex,my favorite subjects. Plus the fact that the woman flirted with him but didn't know his girl was blowing him. A sequel would be nice but I don't need one.
This one is absolutely brilliant. Please do not try to top it. Just go on with another story. Can't wait ...
I loved it. Simple, straight forward and even somewhat predictable. But a delight to read and the closing lines were great!!
Please don't continue this story. There is no way you can top this!!!!
how could anything like this take place in front of children? Obviously,this writer didn't think this through unless he or she is a disgusting pervert.
This was an excellent story! I have to admit I would have liked it better if the vampire's kids had moved on to another house or something. But you have a beautifully deviant mind; a little exhibitionism, a little bondage, and a good tease. Thanks and "keep up" the good work.
A very different take on the whole "Halloween Decorations" theme. The wife's hidden blowjob would have been good, but adding the exhibitionist neighbor dangerously flirting made it that much better. Good job!
What a naughty fun read!!! You know I love your sense of humor. Please, don't care about this "Mr. Nice Guy" and his rating. He has shown much more of his poor self than he could ever damaged your story. You see there are lots of people - including me - who liked it. Looking foreward to reading more.
TTK, Short Stuff
Passive writing weakens an otherwise interesting tale. Suspension of disbelief problems also prevent full enjoyment.
Good luck, but work on you technique and style.
Awesome, I love the "hidden blowjob in public" theme.
Thank you for writing.
P.S. Would you give me Ann's phone number?
I think the All Hallows' Eve contest just got tougher! Pixies score over Vamps!
Didn't remember this was in the 'random selections' section.
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