All Comments on 'A Friendship Forced Upon Me'

Now i'm waiting for the next park, I love his cockiness

Check your grammer and spelling and make it a true 100%. The concepts were good, the style was also. Finish the job with excellent writing and you have publishable material.

He's coming back. What will his punishment be? Let her get her revenge.

I loved it!!! Keep writing, I can't wait to read what happens when he comes back.

Call the police and report the rape. Normally I enjoy a lot of the non-consent/reluctance stories, because they involve the art of seduction, changing a no to a yes. This one was simply a story of a girl getting raped by a drunken "friend." Maybe it hits too close to the bone with me, because it nearly happened to me the same way. Luckily, I got a good kick to the guy's nads, enough to get him off me and give me a head start for the door and my car and escape. I'm sorry, but a painful rape and betrayal of trust is not my idea of an erotic story.

story was ok but women dont like watching porn with two chicks adn to the comment below me, why cant you people ever get that this is non consent im sorry it hit close to you but we dont know that and cant write the non consent the only way you want it its strange you dont like drunken rape but your like other rape

I loved it! More spanking in the next one please.