Gotta tell you -After all these sick stories -I am of the mind that you need help --What the F----is wrong with a guy that has this marriage burn baby burn attitude ?-Is this your life story ?--I know you have writing talent --USE IT!!!!
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Anonymous10/12/08
I agree
I dought you have a wife with these fantsays but you must have had good relationships with someone once, Is this really how they ended cause the idiot in your story just ended his. Sick and stupid, not erotic.
by
Anonymous10/12/08
W.T.F
A husband is forcing a wife to play with other men. She appears to regret it. But that might be an act. The husband needs some serious therapy. He should not be married to this woman she deserves better.
by
Anonymous10/12/08
WTF
XANUSLOVER is a sicko. The musband is actually his alter ego. The story is only fiction but the writers sickness remains. He is truly a sick bastard
by
Anonymous10/12/08
Why doesnt the wife just shoot the pathetic husban
and move on with her life. She could say someone the husband brought into the shot him and she didnt know the person. Wher she refused to have sex with the man as her husband wanted the guy just shot her husband and left. Easy quick and simple.
by
Anonymous10/12/08
Round 12
Here's hoping John gets a piece of Jen and she gets a hot story to tell Michael. I enjoy the reluctant and seductive themes of this loving (hot) wives story. Can't wait till Tyrone is banging Jen and Michael accidentally discovers them.
Good work.
by
Anonymous10/12/08
FU WTF
To all that dont like it Dont read it..WTF right back at ya..How fucking simple is that
by
Anonymous10/12/08
you are a good writer
in terms of style and everything that makes it readable more so wanting to read. to bad you don't think. to bad you have a big lack emotionally. to bad you even like your defect. it's not going to help to write it down. it makes it worse for sure. you might even harm peple in real world. I hope you find out before it's to late. wish you all the best
by
Anonymous10/12/08
Can't wait for Ch.12
Can't wait for Ch.12 to hit the web. The negative and harsh comments only means Xleglover's writing touched some reader's deep feelings, for any writer, that's a compliment!
Please keep the good works coming.
by
Anonymous10/12/08
gibberish nonsense
.
by
Anonymous10/12/08
Too Many
Too many sik people in this world --anyone who is obsessed with this is as sck as the writer -alittle is ok --but all of legs tales are the same sick theme!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous10/12/08
Too Many
Too many sik people in this world --anyone who is obsessed with this is as sck as the writer -alittle is ok --but all of legs tales are the same sick theme!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous10/14/08
keep them coming
Love the story line and the way you write keep them coming!
by
Anonymous10/20/08
Yes
Good work !
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Anonymous10/28/08
Great work!
great work mate. would love Jen to fuck Dick.... so, when will be your next chapter? its been quite a while! cant wait anylonger mate.... dieing to know what happens next!
English
Sick Puppy!!
Gotta tell you -After all these sick stories -I am of the mind that you need help --What the F----is wrong with a guy that has this marriage burn baby burn attitude ?-Is this your life story ?--I know you have writing talent --USE IT!!!!
I agree
I dought you have a wife with these fantsays but you must have had good relationships with someone once, Is this really how they ended cause the idiot in your story just ended his. Sick and stupid, not erotic.
W.T.F
A husband is forcing a wife to play with other men. She appears to regret it. But that might be an act. The husband needs some serious therapy. He should not be married to this woman she deserves better.
WTF
XANUSLOVER is a sicko. The musband is actually his alter ego. The story is only fiction but the writers sickness remains. He is truly a sick bastard
Why doesnt the wife just shoot the pathetic husban
and move on with her life. She could say someone the husband brought into the shot him and she didnt know the person. Wher she refused to have sex with the man as her husband wanted the guy just shot her husband and left. Easy quick and simple.
Round 12
Here's hoping John gets a piece of Jen and she gets a hot story to tell Michael. I enjoy the reluctant and seductive themes of this loving (hot) wives story. Can't wait till Tyrone is banging Jen and Michael accidentally discovers them.
Good work.
FU WTF
To all that dont like it Dont read it..WTF right back at ya..How fucking simple is that
you are a good writer
in terms of style and everything that makes it readable more so wanting to read. to bad you don't think. to bad you have a big lack emotionally. to bad you even like your defect. it's not going to help to write it down. it makes it worse for sure. you might even harm peple in real world. I hope you find out before it's to late. wish you all the best
Can't wait for Ch.12
Can't wait for Ch.12 to hit the web. The negative and harsh comments only means Xleglover's writing touched some reader's deep feelings, for any writer, that's a compliment!
Please keep the good works coming.
gibberish nonsense
.
Too Many
Too many sik people in this world --anyone who is obsessed with this is as sck as the writer -alittle is ok --but all of legs tales are the same sick theme!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too Many
Too many sik people in this world --anyone who is obsessed with this is as sck as the writer -alittle is ok --but all of legs tales are the same sick theme!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep them coming
Love the story line and the way you write keep them coming!
Yes
Good work !
Great work!
great work mate. would love Jen to fuck Dick.... so, when will be your next chapter? its been quite a while! cant wait anylonger mate.... dieing to know what happens next!
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