Your part was too small, you left very little if anything to make the person anxious for part two. I would have kept writing till at least a deep kiss happened with someone and then just end it for part two. This is much like a girl groping you really quick and then leaving. It was enough to catch your interest but not enough to really aching you for more.
I don't come here often for lack of time but if you don't mind email me when you post the other parts.
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Anonymous10/12/08
I can relate
My Aunt Donna caught me jacking off once,but it was with her panties! Kevin
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Anonymous10/12/08
stupid and boreing
this story has about much tod with incest and taboo as war had to do with wmd's. there was no sex between him and his aunt. nor between the other woman. your story was about as exciteing as watching paint dry. it needs a complet rewrite.
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It's okay to do a story in parts BUT
Your part was too small, you left very little if anything to make the person anxious for part two. I would have kept writing till at least a deep kiss happened with someone and then just end it for part two. This is much like a girl groping you really quick and then leaving. It was enough to catch your interest but not enough to really aching you for more.
I don't come here often for lack of time but if you don't mind email me when you post the other parts.
I can relate
My Aunt Donna caught me jacking off once,but it was with her panties! Kevin
stupid and boreing
this story has about much tod with incest and taboo as war had to do with wmd's. there was no sex between him and his aunt. nor between the other woman. your story was about as exciteing as watching paint dry. it needs a complet rewrite.
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