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keep up the good work
keep up the good work
Brady is the perfect asshole...
...but you still love him bc you are a great writer! Continue!
oooh yes
I just know it's going to get very very hot very soon! Loved this chapter!
OMFG
MORE MORE GOD I NEED MORE!!! When the hell is brady gunna get over himself and stop acting like a dick and find out the truth of it all.And when is erin gunna get enough guts to tell him the truth of it all???? GOD it's so frustratingly GOOD. Can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the great work!!!
WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
My mouth is hanging open! WOW! AESOME chapter! Just wish they were LONGER!!!!!! Can't wait for more!
Wish it was longer ...
I love the plot. I don't know how Brady is going to make up to Erin for being a complete asshole :) sure you have it all planned cant wait
Ouch!
Great chapter, painful scenario. The truly discordant note is how these two characters could harbor so much hatred for so many years, over a single incident. But then, that's the basic premise of the story, isn't it? Good writing.
-- KK in Texas
bs
how stupid. let me guess- they dont know they love each other.
BS needs a life - or perhaps, some inference skill
The heading says it all. The title of CTBK's story is Arch Enemies and it's categorized under 'Romance'. What the fuck do you think the story is gonna be about?
Personally, I thought this was better than the first two chapters for the mistakes were MUCH less and it was longer *yay*. Good job. You're on, um, the Lit road to fame, I guess :P
Thank You!
Thanks once again for a wonderful chapter. Please keep the chapters coming! This is by far the best chapter yet! I just know the next one will be better. Thanks again for a great story.
AAAAAAAA
I just need to see Erin beat the hell out of that asshole!!! God he pisses me.!!!
Im confused
Does he like her or not??? Love the story though
Oh fuck, this is beautiful
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