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by lorencino12/09/09

Haunting

I feel a pain behind these words, but a pain that you have not surrendered to. Perhaps a pain that has allowed you to grow stronger so that you no longer feel the pain. There is this wistful mood associated with the final sometimes but it is not spoken by someone falling apart. I'm moved.

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